So please tell me what you think. It was kind of spur of the moment. I looked out around 6:30pm and told her to get dressed, were going out to take some photos. She has NO makeup on, and she was very reluctant of going. After a few mins of taking some shots, she started enjoying herself. We all really had fun before the sun went down.


btw, I take constructive critisism very well, so please be honest.


Taylor

 

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im not a photographer, but i knwo things that i like

i like those pictures.

you have a really beautiful subject, in really nice and casual poses. (not formal like).

there are some i like more than others. the sitting on the wall, the sitting up against the building. and a close one of her face.

but they all have something to focus on, something interesting to see.


you and she did good

 

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I think no makeup was the right choice anyway for the settings you had. If she had been done up it wouldn't have gone so well with the natural setting.

I'd have some criticism but I hardly ever take pictures of people.

 

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Nice work. I like them but the lighting is a little underwhelming. Not knowing the surroundings it's hard to tell where the sun is in a lot of them or if it's obstructed, but i would try to make a point of going out of your way to take advantage of whatever natural light you can, especially late in the day there is really nice soft light that isn't being taken advantage of in a lot of the pictures. I really like the back lighting in #43, the back part of the brick wall and especially her hair are really gorgeous, i don't have a lot of experience with reflectors but i would think a gold one would light up her face really nicely if you can't use a flash.

I think you have potential for sure. Keep shooting, keep trying new things, but definitely make lighting your subject a priority.

edit- If you could combine the back lighting of 43 with say, the face lighting from 39 it would definitely be a fantastic shot. A reflector or a flash with an orange gel on it would probably work really nicely.

 

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Lots of really nice photos! I especially like number 39 and 43. Wonderful warm light, and good poses.


There are a few where the technical part is a bit off. For instance if you look at number 40 and 42, the focus is wrong on both of them. (#40 the focus is on her glasses, a common problem with people wearing them.. like me , and #42 looks like the focus is infront of her, or it might just be some slight movement.) There are others with the same, but those two were the ones I really noticed it on right away.


About the composition. Sure there are many takes on what makes a good composition, and rules are meant to be broken. But you should be aware of what rules you break, and why :]

Lets take a quick example:




I've cropped this picture slightly different from what you did (if you did crop it at all)

I've used the rule of thirds to put her eyes two thirds from the bottom. I've also straightened it slightly, as the brick wall was a bit crooked. It's very important when you work with strong lines like that, that you keep them in mind in your post-production. A crooked line can throw off a photo very quickly. (most commonly a horizon, or the edge of a bed of water.)

I might have cropped it a bit tighter at her back as well..


There are other small details I find annoying as well

#44 could have been really really good. but the hand in the bottom is a bit distracting, crop it out. The composition could have been better, don't put her eyes in the middle of the photo. And finally, tell her to put her glasses on properly before shooting Mine always slip down on the nose a bit, so that I've become used to wearing them like that, and by the looks of it, so has she.


Other then that, you have a few really good poses, and some .. not so good. The ones where she pushes her whole body into the wall, looking at you (like #24) look a bit stiff and unnatural. No one would lean on a wall like that. (or so I imagine when I see the pics ) Then again, it works in the close shot ones. (Like #26 which is really good!)


Hope I didn't sound overly critical, I really like quite a few of them. But you should be a bit more critical when it comes to the details. And missed focus is a no-no!

 

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I guess I should have also said in the OP that there was no flash used, nor any reflectors. The sun was heading down fast. And this was my very first attempt ever to try to take any people pics...


While shooting, I tried to remind myslef about the 1/3 rule, which I knew, but kept forgetting. There is so much to remember. I know that with practice, it will start coming more natural.


btw, all pics are as they were taken off the camera. No post production.


Not that I am making any excuses, I just know that I have a LOT of practice ahead of me.


And Dirtbrother and Raiztlin, thanks for the constructive critisism, this is exactly what I was asking for. I will keep all that in mind the next time we go out, along with all the other stuff I have to remember...lol!!!

 

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Post the original file of number 43 and let me play with it. I'll post it how I would have worked with it along with comments as to what I did

 

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then save the .psd so I can see!


thats something else I am studying, photoshop and lightroom. I have the lynda.com videos that I have been watching.

 

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Original, sized down:




My edit w/o adjusting white-balance;




I'd probably end up with something like that. Didn't do very much really.


Cranked up the recovery slider to get rid of some of the burnt out areas

Added some clarity (about 30)

Added some blacks and fill light, to increase contrast.

Adjusted the tone curve for even more contrast.

Lightened the irises a bit

Softened her skin some.

Added a bit of colour to her lips


also did one where I adjusted the white-balance a bit:

 

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it looks so much better!


I have muuuuch to learn...


thanks!

 

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