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Raiztlin  2 stars
Title: Dick Tracy
Posts: 397
Registered: 2002-1-23 08:10:37
I think this second one is better then the first actually. Technically they are just about the same (good) but I like the second rose better. And I like the composition better as well.


I really think you should get in the habit of adjusting your images slightly before you publish them though


in less then 2 minutes I did the following to your picture:


- Increaed clarity to about 30.

- Added some contrast. (more highlights)

- Resized it for web.

- Cropped it slightly.





I think that gives it that little extra "pop" that makes it stand out a little bit more, and all that normally doesn't take alot of work / time.


Sidenote:


I feel like I'm being very critical towards you atm, but please keep in mind that I've liked just about every phote you've put out here lately. I'm merely offering tips, not always something you want to listen to, as I can only relay the way I do things. And that's just one of an infinite ways to do it right, there are (almost) no wrongs

 

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Nakal  2 stars
Title: Moderator
Bad Moogle

Posts: 363
Registered: 2002-7-9 11:50:38
Dont let Raiz get you down, Tsingtao2, he uses Nikon....

Much to Raiz hehe

Really though, I think he sees a ton of potential in you and is being somewhat "harsh" to try to improve your pics. Dont let any of it get you down, because the pics you have been posting are excellent so far!

 

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tsingtao2  3 stars
Posts: 678
Registered: 2000-10-10 23:08:10
Nakal posted:

Dont let Raiz get you down, Tsingtao2, he uses Nikon....


Much to Raiz hehe


Really though, I think he sees a ton of potential in you and is being somewhat "harsh" to try to improve your pics. Dont let any of it get you down, because the pics you have been posting are excellent so far!



thanks I am PS stupid right now. I am taking tutorials online on PS. And since I dont have a single ounce of artistry running through my veins, its hard to visualise outside the camera frame, unless there is a LR or PS template...lol!

 

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